Yyeah like CJ, I have no time to write my fanfic but I also made another blog. I've had mine longer than CJ but I never told anyone but CJ and Nudge All The Way. Yeah so mines the point of view of this werewolf pack of 6. it's www.keepersofthenight.blogspot.com. Go look at it if u want. Yeah so theres 6 wolves:
Sorry I had my Twilight Fan Fic chapter done but I forgot to post. Whoooooooooppppppsyyyyy...... anyway here's the Twilight Fanfic Chapter 3
“Here, Renseme, come here pretty baby!” Rosalie Hale called summoning her niece
The small baby walked over to the door and opened it for the blonde vampire.
“Thank you sweetie!”
Together the 2 walked out to hunt.
Edward Cullen put his arm around his wife. “She is adorable, isn’t she?” He asked
Bella Cullen simply nodded
“No fair, Bella. I can’t read your mind, what’s wrong, my love.”
“Nothing, I just kinda wanna see Jacob.”
“Alright, see you later.”
Bella ran out to La Push and right into Seth.
“Hey Seth what’s up!”
“Hi Bella nothing, you looking for Jake?”
“Yeah, where is he?”
“Last I saw he was with Ryanna. Sorry, Bellz but Sam gunna kill me soon, talk to you later!”
Seth ran off while Bella stood thinking. Ryanna? A new werewolf?
Bella walked over to Jacob’s house and knocked on the door.
“Billy, is Jacob home?”
Billy shook his head “He’s out getting pizza.”
“Ok” Bella said with a nod heading over to the pizza place.
When she walked in she saw Jacob sitting with a new girl laughing. She calmly walked over.
“Hey Jake!”
“’Sup Bella?”
“Nothing just saying hi.”
“Do you want to sit?”
“Sure.”
Bella took the seat next to Jacob.
“Bella, this is Ryanna, she’s new to La Push so I’m just showing her around.”
“Hi, I’m Bella.” She said with a smile holding out her hand
“I’m Ryanna.” She replied shaking her hand.
“Well, I don’t want to be a burden so I’ll just see ya later Jake.”
“K, Bella. See you later.”
Bella walked out of the pizza place and went back home to Edward.
Awwwww, that’s so cute, Jacob has a girlfriend
Bella reached the Cullen home in a matter of minutes.
“Edward! You’re never going to guess what I saw at La Push!”
“What?”
“Jacob was at the pizza place with a girl, isn’t that cute?”
“Yes, but he’ll never find a girl quite like you.”
“I feel bad for anyone going out with Fido.” Rosalie said
Renesmee giggled. Bella had to giggle too.
“Rosalie, c’mon, it’s cute. It’s good to see Jacob getting over Bella.” Esme interjected.
“Let’s just see how long it takes for things to go wrong. Anyone? Emmett?”
“10 bucks says dog boy last 2 weeks before he blows the werewolf secret.” Emmett said placing the money on the table.
“I give him a week and a half.” Jasper entered in putting 10 dollars on the table.
“Guys! Honestly! You can’t bet money on someone’s love life.” Esme scolded
“Your right Esme.” Emmett gave in with a cheap smile “Losers have to be the winner’s servant and do everything they say. No exceptions, Rosalie”
“Alright, now there’s a bet.” Jasper yelled punching the air.
“You two are going down.” Rosalie smiled like a fox that just spotted easy prey.
Esme rolled her eyes.
***Back at La Push***
Jacob drove Ryanna home.
“Thanks Jacob, I had a lot of fun.”
“Me too.”
“Do you wanna hang out again sometime?”
“Sure.”
Then Jacob leaned down and Ryanna stood on her tip toes and they kissed!
After the kiss Jacob hopped on his motorcycle and sped home.
This is Chapter 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yay! I dont want any Oh, how could you do that do Bella! Jusut read it and all the other hapters will make sense.
Jacob pondered for about a half hour on this until he saw something on the beach…
She had copper skin, black hair to her waist and bright turquoise eyes. 16, 17 Jacob figured. I’ve never seen her around before.
Jacob decided to run home and ask Billy real fast. Jacob sped home and quickly asked his father if anyone had moved in recently
“Actually, yes on Friday I think.” He replied. “A long lost Quileute family, their great grand ancestors left a few generations ago and then they decided to come back and moved in last week.”
“Thanks Dad!” Jake yelled halfway down to the beach. The girl was still there, sitting on rocks and watching the waves roll off the rocks. Jacob coolly walked over to her.
“Hey what’s up, I’m Jake.” He said with a smile
“Hello, I’m Ryanna. I just moved here.” She replied
“You like it so far?”
“Yeah, it gorgeous, the ocean, the forest, everything.”
“Do you know where the best pizza in La Push is?”
She nodded
“Would you like me to show you?”
She grinned “Yeah, that’d be cool.”
Jacob grinned back and took her back to his house.
“That’s your motorcycle?”
“Yeah, do all my own work, built this thing myself.”
“Wow.” She said rubbing the handlebars
“You ready?” Jacob asked handing her his blue helmet
She put the helmet on and she and Jacob hopped on the bike. Jacob took her to Gino’s and ordered her their famous pizza, a Sicilian slice with warm chicken cutlet in the crust and on the pizza.
“Wow. There’s no stuff like this in L.A.” She laughed
Jacob grinned taking a huge bite of his third slice
“You eat like an animal.” She joked
Jacob laughed mostly at the irony
The Ghost and ghouls of October are around the corner. Keep your doors and windows locked, your light on and a teddy bear close. The ravens have taken flight and October is here. Feel the apprehesion in the air and watch everything closely, for anything can happen. Always second guess yourself, for nothing is what it seems. Have a happy October and remember, be afraid, be very afraid.
Twizzlers and Pepsi & Skittles and Sour Strips
Silver Rose and NYB
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PS Follow the car....
This is myy newset Twilight fan fic, "The Question" is the name of the chapter...yeah...soooooooooooo
Jacob paced back and forth, his huge wolf muscles rhythmically moving up and down making his red fur gleam in sun. Why am I stuck patrolling? He thought to himself.
Jacob suck it up! We all have responsibilities in this pack, just because you imprinted on someone doesn’t change that!
Great Sam again Jacob thought. The pack's ray of sunshine.
Cheer up, Jake I’ll patrol for you.
SETH, NO YOU WILL NOT! JACOB IS STILL IN THIS PACK AND HE’S GOING TO CONTRIBUTE TO IT!
No comment from Seth
Jacob couldn’t stop thinking of Renesmee, her hair that hung in ringlets, her compassionate chocolate eyes that dug into his soul. NO! JAKE SNAP YOUSELF OUT OF IT! YOU ARE A WEREWOLF! Great, he was talking like Sam to himself.
See what you do to me?
Shut up Jacob! Look at what you’re doing!
Jacob zoomed back to Earth only to walk into a tree. He heard Sam’s chuckling.
I repeat, see what you do to me
Well if you weren’t thinking of that vampire kid you wouldn’t have done that now would you?
What exactly do we patrol for? All the vampires of Forks are playing with my Rensemee. Jacob thought.
Despite his desires, Jacob patrolled, his body sluggishly heaving its way through the forest. All of a sudden Seth galloped over.
Hey Jake! He screamed like a 4 year old on a sugar rush into Jacob’s mind
Hi Seth
Hey Jacob, can I talk to you later? Alone.
Yeah, sure. Sam how much longer do we have to go through this?
Paul and Quil just came over so you and the kid can go.
Jacob and Seth ran through the woods over to the beach where Seth phased out of his wolf form and Jacob followed.
“So what is it?” Jacob asked.
“Yeah, see Jake, you know that girl? The baby? What’s it name?”
“Rensemee?”
“Yeah her. What was it like? Imprinting I mean. Was it fun? Or was it like you had no idea what had happened or you just knew what to do or what?”
Jacob shrugged “I dunno. It was weird. Why?”
Seth made a sheepish look “I want to imprint! It looked cool like you make such a bond with the person, imprinting… it looks cool.”
“Seth, you can’t imprint on anyone, it has to be someone that’s important to you, like your soul mate or something.” Or the one you love’s kid. Jacob wanted to add. “I didn’t pick who I imprinted on, it just kinda happened.”
Seth’s eyes went wide “How do I find her?”
Jacob shrugged. He really didn’t know.
Seth thought for a second, “Thanks Jake.” He said and walked back to his place
How do you find your imprintee? How do you know who the one is?
Suddenly Jacob saw something on the beach...
"Oh My God" he whispered to himself
K, after wayyyyyyyy too much thinking and help from nudge all the way i have Jacob Blacks song!!!!!!!!!!!!! K, Jakes song is Kryptonite by: 3 Doors Down http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kIMNVcS3W_w my explinations are in this color
I took a walk around the world
To ease my troubled mind- he left to ease his mind
I left my body laying somewhere in the sands of time- he lft but hi mind was like somewhere else
I watched the world float to the dark side of the moon-he watched "bad" things happen, well atleast according to the werewolves
I feel there is nothing I can do, yeah- self explaintory
I watched the world float to the dark side of the moon
After all I knew it had to be something to do with you-his Bella sense activated
I really don’t mind what happens now and then
As long as you’ll be my friend at the end- he doesnt want to lose Bella as a friend
(Chorus)
If I go crazy then will you still call me Superman- He wants Bella to look up to him
If I’m alive and well, will you be there holding my hand-He wants to know if Bella's only going to be there when hes hurt or all the time
I’ll keep you by my side - he wants Bella to know thatll hell always be there
With my superhuman might Kryptonite-is he human? I think not
(Chorus)
You called me strong, you called me weak- shes looked up and down to him
But still your secrets I will keep- he wants Bella to know hell always be there
You took for granted all the times I never let you down
You stumbled in and bumped your head- shes Bella shes hit her head plenty of times
If not for me then you would be dead- he got he out of the water when she jumped the cliff
I picked you up and put you back
On solid ground- In New Moon, he was there for her when Edward left
(Chorus)
If I go crazy then will you still call me Superman
If I’m alive and well
Will you be there holding my hand I’ll keep you by my side
With my superhuman might Kryptonite Yeah!!
If I go crazy then will you still call me Superman
If I’m alive and well, will you be there
Holding my hand I’ll keep you by my side
With my superhuman might Kryptonite
Again: THANK U SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH NUDGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PS NEXT R GUNNA BE FAXNESS SONGS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY FAXNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Alright, Nudge all the way wins ill do graphics again, but im not so sure itll happen everyday but there is today, actually 2!
This is what subick thinks he is:
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this is what subick really is...
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Notice that there was no graphic today and yesterday, its cuz i got bored of graphics so I'm not doing them anymore...
Now that I'm doing character songs again, here are my first couple of character songs, Max, Fang and Bella. Fang's was Faint by Linkin Park, Max's was Gomenasai by: T.a.t.U and Bella's Song is Better In Time by: Leona Lewis, which is finally showing up on the radio! The lyrics and expliantions are on these dates:
Ari: September 14, 2008
Fang: June 24, 2008
Max: June 23, 2008
Bella: June 25, 2008
PS Jake's Song coming up!!
Okay, this is Ari's song, Animal I Have Become by Three Days Grace. I'm going to post chaacter songs while I make my next fanfic. Here's the link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kRLAyG3gKYg . PS my explinations are purple.
I can't escape this hell- the School
So many times i've tried
But i'm still caged inside- He can't leave
Somebody get me through this nightmare- He wants help
I can't control myself- when he gets mad hes all violent
{Chorus}
So what if you can see the darkest side of me?- the eraser side
No one would ever change this animal I have become- hell always be an eraser
Help me believe it's not the real me- hes lost hope
Somebody help me tame this animal- help him stop being mad
(This animal, this animal)
I can't escape myself- he cant change the fact hes an eraser
(I can't escape myself)
{Verses}
So many times i've lied- self explianitory
(So many times i've lied)
But there's still rage inside- he always mad
Somebody get me through this nightmare- he wants help
I can't control myself- when he gets mad he changes weather he wants to or not
{Chorus}
So what if you can see the darkest side of me?- the eraser side
No one would ever change this animal I have become- he cant change to human all the time
Help me believe it's not the real me-hes forgetting his old life
Somebody help me tame this animal I have become- self explainitory
Help me believe it's not the real me- look up 2 lines!!!!
Somebody help me tame this animal- his eraser side
Somebody help me through this nightmare- he wants help from the school
I can't control myself- self explainitory
Somebody wake me from this nightmare-he wants the school to be a bid dream
I can't escape this animal
(This animal, this animal, this animal, this animal, this animal, this animal, this animal)
{Chorus}
So what if you can see the darkest side of me?-said before
No one will ever change this animal I have become- said before
Help me believe it's not the real me- said before
Somebody help me tame this animal I have become- said before
Help me believe it's not the real me- said before
Somebody help me tame this animal (This animal I have become)-said before
I dont care what anyone thinks of this graphic,i just posted it because the puppy's cute
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U may have noticed that this is called Graphic of Spt. 12 instead of Quote of Sept. 12. This is becuz a quote is a bunch of words and a bunch of words sounds stupid so the post are now going to be called Gaphics of whatever the date is and I might do this a little longer than 2 weeks... heres the graphic:
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Don't tell him this but i think the cat is drunk...but its just a hunch...
Hmmmmmmmmmm...What do u think happened here? I got a pretty good idea... Comment!!!!!!!!!
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This is my final Twillight chapter and whatever...
I anxiously awaited the other coven to come. One day, while I was coming home from shopping with Alice, I saw 5 vampires on the horizon running for the Cullen home. I rushed inside and told Carlisle. We waited outside for them. When they stopped in front of the house I noticed that they were very young only around 11. I quickly memorized the 5 vampires. One had long brown hair that came to his shoulders and curved at the end. Another, to his left had wavy golden hair on top of his head. The next one had wavy black hair in a short Mohawk. The next had whitish/ goldish blonde hair that came to just where his next starts and a serious/ can’t exactly read kind of face. The final had thick brown hair in a mushroom cut.
“Hello” Carlisle said warmly
“Hi, I’m John and this is my coven” The long haired one said
“I’m Skyer” The wavy golden haired said
“I’m Michael” Mohawk kid said
“I’m Nico” The blonde one said with the hair to his neck. His voice was extremely cracked but nice at the same time
“And finally, I’m Joey.” The mushroom top kid said
“I’m Carlisle and this is Juliet” He introduced us
“I’m sorry about transforming you and leaving you in the woods.” Skyer said “I smelled you’re blood and attacked after I’d seen what I’d done, I ran off.”
“It’s okay.” I said to him, he was kinda cute
“Please, come in.” Carlisle said motioning to the door.
“Thank you” John said motioning the rest of the boys in, he was probably the leader
The boys sat down on the couch, exhausted, they were so young and they ran here from Arizona.
“Here you go.” Esme said smiling handed each boy a cup of mountain lion blood.
So they drank animal blood too, good
“Wait!” Alice said suddenly realizing something “Skyer, you said you bit Juliet, so how do you drink animal blood.”
“A good question.” Skyer answered “You see after I bit Juliet, we realized human blood wasn’t the right choice, so we began to drink animal blood.”
“We are fairly young vampires so changing our diet was a little bit of a challenge” John said smiling, and the first time I realized they had red eyes too, John and Nico’s a lighter red, almost orange.
“Amazing” Carlisle said in awe “It me years to perfect changing my diet.”
“Well,” Joey started “John has the gift of extreme matureness, he’s as controlled as any of you and Nico has the power to control emotions, read minds, and change how you think, so he can prevent thinking of attacking human and Michael can predict the future so he can see if one of us loses control.”
“Amazing” Carlisle repeated “I’ve never seen a coven like yours.” He said in a weak voice
For awhile we just sat around. Alice told Michael about controlling what you see and how to see what you wanted. Edward and Nico exchanged stories and ideas about reading minds. I talked with John about random stuff like music and vampireness. I had such a strong connection with him, I knew him from somewhere, just, where? Anyone else who wasn’t talking was watching T.V.
Yeah, that was the last chapter, that I'm posting, the only person who knows the other chapters is New York's Bella, HA-HA yeah...so...whatever
This is from MyHotComments.com, not PYZAM, but it expresses how I feel about CJ
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TOMORROW i WILL post the FINAL Twilight chapter. Okay? Yea, I might not post a new fan fic for awhile with school and a story me and NYB are working on, CJ don't ask cuz I will NOT tell u. TTYT (Talk To You Tomorrow)
Here's today's quote...it's funny and kinda of stupid but the pics cute!
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Call me retarded, but ive benn on pyzam a little o much so now im gong to post something funny find on pyzam every day for two weeks. The first quote is about me, CJ and New York's Bella
Now that school has started, my post might be a little off. Just one thing, the poll on ur right. I might to character songs again. So vote and wait for the last chapter.
I'm actually starting to like this anyway...yeah..whatever..
My first few weeks with the Cullens were pretty routine. I remembered enough bits and pieces about myself for Carlisle to find out who I was. I was Juliet Stone I was 12 and I disappeared a month ago.
Here’s what would happen everyday at the Cullen house: Carlisle would call other covens (which I found out is what you call a group of vampires that live together) and try to find out who my transformer was. Edward his “oldest” “son” (he was created first) and Emmett, a VERY, VERY muscular vampire with a sick twisted sense of humor taught me to fight and took me hunting and how to use my vampire skills. The second oldest, Alice, took me shopping every second I wasn’t working with the guyz (which meant every morning all day, I shopped. I practiced and hunted at night). I had to had at least 16 silk gowns, 15 silk night gowns, a few pairs of denim shorts, 1 pair of sneakers and a couple of t shirts (I begged her to buy me some) after my first couple of days. The youngest son, Jasper, taught me self control and how to act human. The other daughter, Rosalie, who was GORGEOUS, (she had the goldenest eyes, medium length blonde hair (which was perfectly healthy), long red nails and a perfect hourglass body) stayed quiet on the couch usually putting on lip gloss. The vampire Carlisle introduced as Esme, cleaned the house and hummed and sang, like a normal stay at home mom.
Carlisle taught me all about vampires, how only his coven drank animal blood, all the other covens drank human blood. He told me about werewolves, vampire’s mortal enemies who lived on the other side of the forest; we had a treaty with them that we can’t cross lands. He told me about the Volturi, the head vampires, who you SHOULDN’T get in trouble with. He also showed me my reflection in the mirror. My skin was PALE white and I looked gorgeous, not as beautiful as Rosalie, but still pretty, my hair was waist length and brown with blonde highlights, my eyes, THEY WERE CRIMSION!!! LIKE SERIOUSLY BLOOD RED!!!!! Carlisle said they would be like that for a while; Alice went to the store and bought me boxes of contacts to color my eyes.
One day, Carlisle came into the living room all happy.
“I found out who transformed you!” He said
“Who?” I asked
“A vampire named Skyer from a coven in Arizona. He lives with 4 other male vampires; Michael, Nico, Joey and John.” He said
This was okay with me, when my memory started to return and I remember playing football and baseball with a bunch of boys and hanging out with boys.
“That’s a big coven, plus Juliet, that’s 6, we have 7 vampires.” Alice realized
“Yes, that is a big number.” Carlisle said responding to her comment
“Did you call them?” I asked
“Yes they’ll be coming in a few days.” Carlisle said hopefully
I was soooo happy I was going to meet a new family, my family
Forget my last post I'm going to cut out the other chapters and end the fan fic on chapter 6, CJ, NYB, I'm still gunna write the rest, just not post it, you guyz r lucky u guyz r special
Yeah, ummmmmmmmmm with my fan fic, the Twilight one, I finally thought of a place to go with it, but I'm going a little crazy, I'm going to take this to 7 or 8 chapters, if you dont wanna read something that long, go to some other website like CJ's or something Chapter... I forgot what I was up to coming soon, it's writtn, I just wanna keep u guyz waiting..hehehehe I'm evil! mwahahahaahahahaha
Again, I'm still NOT IN LOVE WITH THIS FAN FIC but I'm liking a little more, very little bit more, very very little bit more, very very VERY little bit more, very very very..... well, u get the point this, whatever, here we go
“Whoa! I’m a what? I shrieked
“Sit down.” The man with blonde hair in his 30-ies said motioning his hand down
I sat and the man started to explain
“I am Carlisle, and these are my children: Alice, Rosalie, Emmett, Jasper and Edward. Ad my wife, Esme” As he said each name one of the amazingly beautiful people on the couch stood up.
“We are… vampires.” He continued
“WHAT!!!!!!!!! VAMPIRES!!!!!!!” I jumped up and screamed
“Yes” Carlisle continued in a calm voice “And… so are you.”
I FLIPPED OUT
“WHAT!!!!! I’M A VAMPIRE!!!!! HOW!?!?! WHAT?!!? WHEN?!?!? WHY?!?!?!” I screamed and bawled. It took about an hour for me to calm down.
“It’s……. complicated” Carlisle started calmly “You were on the bridge of death and a vampire bit you and injected venom into your body and you were transformed into a vampire.”
I kind of hyper ventilated all over again, but only for a half hour this time. My vampire brain is so exact!
“K, so one question, who am I?” I asked Carlisle
“I’m not sure, you’ll have to ask whoever transformed you.” Carlisle said soberly
“Who was that?” I asked quietly, afraid his response
‘’I honestly don’t know, but you’re more than welcome to stay with my coven.”
“Thank you.” I said pretending I knew what a coven was
K, theres new editions to my blog, Flippy, Pippy, and, Borat. They're... FISH!!!!!! The purple one is Pippy, the red one is Borat and the yellow one is Flippy, I'm gunna post Sparky II, (may SparkyI rest in piece in the big computer in the sky)
Sorry I haven't been posting i haven't finished Chapter 3 yet, ooops, (CJ, u can come and kill me later dont waste a comment) it'll be about 2-3 days max, SORRY!!!!!!!!
This is chapter 2 again, not exaclt IN LOVE but whatever...
“Shhhhhhhh!” Some one yelled at me, at least, I think it was talking to me.
“Hello?” I shrieked, but then I realized, my voice sounded like bells, it sounded gorgeous
“It’s okay” A voice that sounded like chimes comforted me
“W-W-W-W-Who’s there?” I worked out
Then out of the bushes came a girl. About 17, with spiky brown hair and honey colored eyes, she was short.
“I’m Alice, please, follow me.” She said motioning her hand towards her
“Okay” I told her. Why would I say yes? Who is she?
I walked with Alice for a while.
“Where are we going?” I asked her
“To a place where all your questions will be answered.” She replied ominously
Alice led me to a big house. It was graceful. It was faded white, 3 stories tall, rectangular and well proportioned. One light was on, probably in the living room, I heard people talking all with dreamy voices. Alice walked me to the front door and she didn’t even knock, a man, he looked around 30, blonde hair and about 5’5. We walked in and there were 6 people, all of them stunningly beautiful and with honey colored eyes.
“Alice, who’s your friend?” A woman with caramel colored hair and a musical voice asked.
“Esme, Carlisle, guys, this is a new born.” She replied looking back at me
Here's chapter 1 of my twilight fan fic,i kinda like it but totally totally ABOSOLUTELY in LOVE with it so comment if u want
The moonlight was bright and silver in my eyes. Where am I? Who am I? Everything’s such a blur. Why is my throat so dry? I opened my eyes all the way and… and everything was so clear. I could see the droplets of water on the high tree branches. I could see every star in the sky. Ouch! My throat burned. Need water… no not water, what am I craving? Then I smelled it, I can’t explain it. It was metallic and bland. I didn’t care what it smelled like, I ran towards it. I was running, but it didn’t feel like running, it felt like flying, my feet were touching the ground, just too fast for it to feel like they were. I sped up and found a herd of deer. I jumped towards the lead buck. I took him down quickly. How was I super strong, fast, and have such accuracy? I didn’t care at the moment; I tore the hide of the buck and drank his blood. WHY AM I DRINKING BLOOD? I decided to walk through the forest see who- or what I could find.
I definitely had to be walking for at least an hour. Then… I heard a rustling in the bush.
Twilight fan fic coming soon!!!! It's not like Cj's *see www.cjsfanfic.blogspot.com* the first chapter will probably come tomorrow
Here's my final chapter. I'm still not gunna say that's Maximum Ride's not mineand Dexi is and stuff cuz its BORING.Here we go!!!!!!!!!!!!
“Dex,” Fang spit out the word “Can we talk to Max, alone?”
“Sure” He replied while walking
“ARE YOU INSANE!?!?!?!” Fang yelled
“No,” I replied sarcastically “I see a friend who needs help. Fang, he only has a few days to live, lets show him the outside he’s never been further out of this rat hole than the field. Please, let him escape with us tonight.”
“Fine, we’ll vote. All for Dex, raise your hand.” Fang said reluctantly
Angel, Nudge, Iggy and I raised our hands.
“I’m sorry, Max, Angel” Gazzy started “I just don’t trust this place or the people in it.”
“It’s okay Gazzy, but it’s 2 to 4, Dexi comes” I comforted Gazzy and bragged to Fang at the same time, I rock
“Dexi” I called him in “You’re escaping tonight.”
He practically jumped up and down and then he started howling
“Shut up” I hissed
“Sorry” he said in the 4 year old voice
Iggy and Fang went over the plan with him. We were going to find the nearest window and crash through it. I know, wow, that’s the best you have, Max, well yeah it is, deal with it.
Midnight crept in. We all got ready to fly like there was no tomorrow. As the clock hit midnight we ran. I mean we ran, we took off like the worlds quietest racecars.
“Now” I said signaling the flock and Dexi to take off.
We jumped off the ground and up to the ceiling. We jumped into a lab room and out the window.
“Up!” I yelled
As my flock flew into a V shape I realized that one was missing, Dexi! I flew out of our neat little formation. I flew around till I saw I furry X shape plummeting toward the ground. It had come, his expiration date. I knew it was coming, just not so soon. I WENT NUTS. All I remember is a blinding rage, not seeing, not feeling, just rage. I flew to the School, kicked in a window and knocked over the chemicals sitting on the white table. Then, I flew like heck out off there and just watched as the School exploded.
I flew over to my flock and we flew into the moon.
THAT'S IT!! HOW WAS IT?!!?!? COMMENT PLEASE!!!!!
Heres Chapter 4, hope you like it, anywayfor the sake of... me, I'm not doing the whole Maximum Ride's not mine thing...
“Oh.Mi.God! Dexi! Did you see your neck?” I exploded
“No, I guess I haven’t looked at the back of my neck in a while.” He said sarcastically picking himself off the floor.
“Y-Y-Y-Y-You g-g-got an EXPIRATION DATE!!” I managed out
“Whats an expiration date?” He asked
“How do you not know what an expiration date is?” I said throwing my hands in the air
“Is it bad” He asked in a 4 year old voice
“Well, see, ummmmmmm, Dexi, an expiration date is a list of numbers on an Erasers neck, and those numbers make a date and that date is the day that the Erasers die” I told him coolly
“WHAT?!?!?!!?! I’m going to die!!!! Quick Max, what do the numbers say?” He freaked out
“Ummmmmmm, 08, the middle is smudged I can’t read the day” I stammered
“But today’s the seventh!” He started crying.
“Dex, calm down,” I pleaded “You have time, let’s not waste it crying”
“Okay” He said with a final sob
I took Dex to Angel’s room where the others were talking. Fang stared at me like he was saying ‘Oh, great Max, another one’. ‘Shut up’ I mouthed at him
“Hey guys this is Dexi” I started calmly “He’s an Eraser I’ve known since, like forever. And, see he got a … expiration date.” I forced out those two awful words. “And I want him to break out with us.”
If you see a small gray dog skipping across your screen, his name is Sparky, he's my page pet, AIN'T HE CUTE?!?!?!?! If you don't see him, GET YOUR EYES CHECKED!!!!!!! ITS A DOG ON THE SCREEN, NOT EXACTLY INCONSPICIOUS!!!!!!
I dont Maximum Ride.......... blah blah blah................... Dexi's , mine....................... blah blah blah............... ON WITH THE FAN FIC!!!!!!!!!!
“Perfect” Fang muttered.
“There’s not that many though” Iggy said
There we were, exhausted, confused and staring at more Erasers, Fang was right, perfect. As usual, Iggy was right, there couldn’t be more than 20. Gazzy and Fang were the first two to jump in and start kicking furry butts. Me and Iggy just watched, well, I watched and Ig was listening to fist hitting chest and sneakers hitting butts. Within minutes all the Erasers were down and we were on our way.
“How much longer are we going to be in here, I’m tired.” Gazzy wined
“Gazzy, shut up!” Fang yelled
We walked around aimlessly for at least another 15 minutes. Then the ever so popular scientist started into the microphone.
“Times up!” He screeched
“THANK YOU!” Gazzy yelled clasping his hands together
Iggy and Fang snickered
“Shut up!” I yelled at the three of them.
“The exit is three corridors ahead” the scientist continued
We ran out of the mazeband went to go find Nudge and Angel. I found them in their rooms and let the questions fire.
“What’d they do to you guys?”
“They let me play with dolls” Angel said in a 4 year old voice
“They let me play soccer” Nudge said lethargically
‘‘What?!?!” Gazzy yelled “We had to run and fight our butts off!!” he continued
“Ha Ha” Angel mocked her brother
“I’ll be back” I said walking away
On my way down the hall and I found who I was looking for.
“Dex!” I whispered and motioned him over
“Hey, Max!” He yelled back
He tripped on, I don’t know what he tripped on, but I didn’t care, because I saw the most horrifying thing in the whole world on his neck.
OOOOOOOOOO,AND ALEX PETTYFER WINS THE POLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DOWN WITH ROBERT PATTINSON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DOWN WITH THE DRUG ADDICT!!!!!!!!!!
OMG, BREAKING DAWN CAME OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ITS SOOOOOOOOOO INCREDUBLY AWSOME. I WAS AT A RELEASE PARTY TILL 12:30 WITH CJ. THIS BOOKS GUNNA ROCK!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry I forgot something in my fan fic: I DO NNOT OWN MAXIMUM RIDE, THATS OWNED BY JAMES PATTERSON AND SO ARE IGGY, FANG, MAX, GAZZY, NUDGE, AND ANGEL..... OTHER NOTE, DEXI IS MINE!!!!!!!!!!!! PAWS { NO PUN INTENDED !!!!!! } OFF!!!!!!
The next day, Fang, Iggy, Gazzy and I were released into the bare, unfortunately familiar, field in the back of the School. As usual, many Erasers were there too, thankfully, none of the Dexi.
I saw a scientist and yelled at him “Where are Angel and Nudge!”
“They’re fine and being tested in the facility.” He replied in a bored tone
Anger smoldered in me and I ran to the building to get the rest of my flock. An Eraser picked me up and chucked me back over to Fang, Iggy and Gazzy. Then as soon as my feet hit the ground, they charged at us, snarling and howling, Gazzy ran out at them screaming some kind of battle cry, and punched one right in the gut. Fang, Iggy and I ran out after him. There was only about thirty of them, so the fight went over pretty fast. The whole time that scientist was taking note and making those um-hmm noises. \
Maximum, don’t focus on the small things, look at the bigger picture
Have I ever told you how much I hate you?
Please, Maximum, nobody ever made a journey with out a pathfinder.
Well I’ve done the impossible before
Hmmm, Maximum, don’t begin to get so full of yourself and your flock, not when your almost at your goal.
‘Whatever’ I wanted to scream at it, but I knew it was gone for a while.
“Proceed with me for more testing.” The scientist said ruining my argument
We walked through the School into a room with a huge maze and a gate about 2 feet above it. The scientist hit a switch and the floor exploded to life, motion sensors. Perfect. Fang leaned over to whisper in my ear.
“Didn’t Angel tell us about this?” He whispered
“Yupp” I said deeply focused on the maze.
“Proceed into the maze” The freakazoid in the white lab coat said eerily
We walked in and we looked around and made a left. A sharp shock ran through my body. Apparently, if we made a wrong turn, we were electrocuted. Gotta love the School. We walked around for a while, never got shocked.
“Why don’t we fly?” Gazzy complained
“I have a feeling the floors not the only thing wired in this crack house.” I said looking up at the net.
We turned the next corner and saw…
In case you peoplez have read me and my friends comments, debating over "Rob Pattz **vomit**" and**hearts** Alex Pettyfer **hearts** I wanna poll u guyz and see who you pick heres pictures of them, *THE ALEX PETTYFER ONE, THE MUSIC IS BY JESSE MACCARTNEY **VOMIT** AND THE PICTURES ARE OF ALEX PETTYFER!!!*
Please Poll !!!!!
Alex Pettyfer: http://youtube.com/watch?v=vByLbVyYRZ8
Robert Pattinson **vomit**:http://youtube.com/watch?v=i0kaFGXgYKE&feature=related
So you people might have heard the Maximum Ride movie is coming out in like 2 years well I have made my own casting, I just need help with Fang, Ari, Ella and Dr. Martinez , comment if you have suggetions and if you like the cast heres the rest of the cast:
Max: Ellen Page
Fang:??
Nudge: Parker Posey
Iggy: Alex Pettyfer ((HE IS SOOOOOOOO HOT, NO TOUCHY!!!!!))
Angel: Elle Fanning
Gazzy: Freddie Highmore
Ari:??
Jeb:Jose Zuniga
Dr.Martinez:??
Ella:??
Omega:Scott Gerbacia
Don't ask why I put Omega, the guy just worked sooooooooooooo good
This is my first Maximum Ride Fan Fic EVER tell me whatcha think NOTE: MAXIMUM RIDE ISN'T MINE, IT IS JAMES PATTERSON'S!! BUT DEXI IS KEEP OFF!!! K, here we gooo!!!!!
At least 200 Erasers, 6 bird kids, and 12:00 a.m. at least, one white hot battle, and unfortunately, we were getting our butts kicked, bad. An Eraser put a nice hard kick into my back and one punched Gazzy in the stomach. Angel was making one Eraser hit another and Nudge was on an Erasers back and punching his head, Iggy and Fang were no where to be found. Something crashed over my head and I blacked out. The last thing I heard was a scream from Nudge.
I woke up. The bright lights burned my eyes; I felt the cold metal braces on my arms, legs and wings. I knew exactly where I was, but where was my flock? I couldn’t see what was 2 feet in front of me and I was completely immobilized, so I was in the ever so popular School, fantastic! I heard the footsteps of the white coats, most likely heading to my room, more great news!
“Hello, Maximum” the eerie, but familiar, voice whispered.
“Hello, Dex” I remembered, he was another Eraser but not as violent as the others, me and him were friends when I was little.
“You remembered!” He yelled jubilantly.
“Shhhh!” I told him “You can’t get caught!”
“Oh, right” He told himself
“Is it true? What happened to Ari? You killed him?” He went on again
“Partly” I stammered
“How? What? Why? When?” He sped on
“Well first he was chasing my flock and I kicked him and he fell down a flight of stairs sand his neck broke, but the science nerds here rearranged his neck and brought him back to life, but later on were in Itex headquarters, and we were fighting off mutants and expiration date came up, so technically, I didn’t kill him.”
“Okay, I see” Dex said fascinated
“Hey, Dexi, where are the others?” I haven't called him Dexi since I was little it felt so wierd like a blast from my childhood
“Other rooms.” He replied quickly.
“Are they all okay?” I asked urgently
“Yeah. You’re the only one awake though.” He coolly replied
“How tights security?” I wanted to know, I wanted out of here ASAP
“Not bad.” He replied
“Could we break out?” I asked him, unimpressed with his last answer
“Sure, as long as you know how to do it.” He said with a grin, he knew me to good
“Thanks Dexi. Do you want escape with us?” I told him
“Would your friends let me?” He asked insecurely
“They have no choice.” I told him with a grin
Me and Dex talked for a long time, I told him about all my adventures, he told me the malevolent things these nut cases were up to, sewing wings on to Erasers without anesthesia, all the shots they were giving them and what they did to him, making him big and clunky. Man, you gotta feel bad for these guys.
Yeah, so that was Part I, Part II ASAP
One of my friends does Peace and Hufflemuffins when she ends a post, one does Cookies and Bubbles, well my thing when I end a post I use Twizzlers and Pepsi, cuz Twizzlers and Pepsi rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO ONE TAKES IT OR I'LL KILL YOU!!!!!!!!!!
Twizzlers and Pepsi,
New Yorks Silver Rose
All right, the Inkheart thing, me and my friend Cj, were at a party and we got soooooooooooo bored, we wrote it together and she said I could post it, UR AN AWSOME FRIEND!!!!!!!! So give her some reconition, kk? visit CJ at cjsfanfic.blogspot.com
Here's the Inkheart Fanfic, it took so long cuz i left it at my friends house, and kept forgetting it, woops! Well, this is Dustfinger talking to Roxanne, IF YOU HAVE NOT READ INKHEART AND INKSPELL, THIS WILL RUIN IT, SO IF U HAVE NOT READ THEM...................... GO FIND ANOTHER WEBSITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 wll, here we go!
"Okay, Roxanne. Before you go all 'why did you desert me', I'm gunna give it to ya straight!First of all our world is just a 'book' in another world. We were created by this old dinosaur who says we're 'fictional' . Then, there was this wierd guy in his mid-forties with a little blonde girl and a woman Who looked like an older clone of said blonde girl. They were reading our 'book' one night, all of a sudden I'm in their living room with a homicidial maniac who name rhymes with 'pasta' and some bald dude obsessed with world domination. Anyways, the forty year old einstien reads his wife into the book and then when she's read out again by some sissy, she's all mute and stuff. Anyway, after I'm out of the book, I meet up with this 15 year old kid in a turban whos like OBSESSED with me, anyways...... turban kid falls in love with the little blonde girl I mentioned before. Now in the near futre I'm going to go all noble and trade my life for the turban kidand get stuck in some parrerell universe with these 'white women'. WHITE WOMEN how racist is that? And now they expect me to play with fire for their amusement, which I'm preety sure is illegal in most countries, yeah, so thats what happened, STILL THINK I'M A NUTJOB?!!??!?! "
KK, so that was it, COMMENT PLEASE!!!!!!! I'll work on another, k?
Peace and Hufflemuffins,
New Yorks Silver Rose
K , look me and my friends r doing one HUGE fan-fic, we're all gunna work on it and post each, one friend will do one chapter and so on, here are the two websites: www.twilightonsnowwhitewings.blogspot.com and www.cjsfanfic.blogspot.com
p.s. inkheart fan fic coming soon!!!!!!!!!
You people might be getting tired of always seeing songs, but I PROMISE this is the last one. This is Better In Time by Leona Lewis, ONCE AGAIN, NOT OWNED BY ME! My explinations are in this color
It's been the longest winter without you- Edward left, see New Moon
I didn't know where to turn to- she was lost without Edward
See somehow I can't forget you - Bella couldn't forget Edward
After all that we've been through
Going coming thought I heard a knock
Who's there no one
Thinking that I deserve it
Now I realize that I really didn't know
If you didn't notice you mean everything- do i have to say more?
Quickly I'm learning to love again - (clearing throat noise) Jacob
All I know is I'm gon' be ok
Thought I couldn't live without you- again do i have to say more?
It's gonna hurt when it heals too - she'll never forget Edward
It'll all get better in time
And even though I really love you
I'm gonna smile cause I deserve to
It'll all get better in time
I couldn't turn on the TV- when Edward left, he was all she could think about
Without something there to remind me
Was it all that easy
To just put aside your feelings
If I'm dreaming don't wanna laugh
Hurt my feelings but that's the path
I believe in And I know that time will heal it
If you didn't notice boy you meant everything- Edward means everything to her
Quickly I'm learning to love again
All I know is I'm gon' be ok
Thought I couldn't live without you - (see top for next few lines explinations)
It's gonna hurt when it heals too
It'll all get better in time
And even though I really love you
I'm gonna smile cause I deserve to
It'll all get better in time
Since there's no more you and me
It's time I let you go So I can be free
And live my life how it should be
No matter how hard it is I'll be fine without you
Yes I will
Thought I couldn't live without you
It's gonna hurt when it heals too
It'll all get better in time
And even though I really love you
I'm gonna smile cause I deserve to
It'll all get better in time
Heres the soong that I think is best for Fang its Faint by: Linkin Park, ONCE AGAINT HIS SONG IS TOO AWSOME TO BE OWNED BY ME!!!!!!!! my expliations are in this color:
I am a little bit of loneliness a little bit of disregard- hes always lonely and misunderstood
Handful of complaints but I can’t help the fact that everyone can seethese scars- he cant help the fact of what they are
I am what I want you to want what I want you to feel - they all have the same feelings
But it's like no matter what I do, I can't convince you,
to just believe this is real
So I let go, watching you, turn your back like you always do- no one listens to him
Face away and pretend that I'm not
But I'll be here 'cause you're all that I got- he can only depend on the flock
I can't feel the way I did before - he doesnt have the same feelings
Don't turn your back on meI won't be ignored
Time won't heal this damage anymore- he cant forget the whitecoats have done to them
Don't turn your back on me I won't be ignored- he wants to be tough
I am a little bit insecure a little unconfident
Cause you don't understand I do what I can but sometimes I don't make sense- do i have to say more?
I am what you never wanna say but I've never had a doubt
It's like no matter what I do I can't convince you for once just to hear me out - he cant make anyone listen to him
So I let go watching you turn your back like you always do
Face away and pretend that I'm not
But I'll be here 'cause you're all that I've got
I can't feel the way I did before- he never has the same feelings
Don't turn your back on me I won't be ignored- he doesnt want to be ignored
Time won't heal this damage anymore- he cant forget what the whitecoats have done to them
Don't turn your back on me
I won't be ignored
Hear me out now
You're gonna listen to me, like it or not
Right now Hear me out now
You're gonna listen to me, like it or not
Right now I can't feel the way I did before
Don't turn your back on me
I won't be ignored
I can't feel the way I did before
Don't turn your back on me I won't be ignored
Time won't heal this damage anymore
Don't turn your back on me
I won't be ignored
I can't feel
Don't turn your back on me
I won't be ignored
Time won't heal
Don't turn your back on me
I won't be ignored
Sorry I forgot some people in my code
Bella: Carrot Orange
Jasper: Purple
Ari: White
Jacob: Salmon
Angel: Light Teal
Gazzy: Pale Yellow
Heres my first fan fic ever! I'm a blunt person, so tell what I'm doing wrong if u dont like it.................. Here we go..............
Hey Rosalie, Alice!
Hey Max, what up?
Hey, ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, can i ask u guys something?
Sure
I wanna go out tonight, get dressed up, so somewhere. A person can only take soooooooooo much Iggy and Fang
YAY!!!!!!!!!, ask Bella I'll do a great job
Bella: (mouthing and waving arms) NOOOOO SAVE YOURSELF!!1
(after hours)
(Walk downstairs in sequined black dress, hair nice and steletto heels)
Oh.My.God
What, what is it Fang?!?!?!?!
Shut up Iggy its nothing
OOOOOKKKKK whatever
C'mon guys
'K
Wait Max!
Yeah?
Ummmmmmmmmmmm, I, uhhhhhhhhhhh, see, ummmmmmmmmm, If I could take, I mean if you dont want to , ummmmmmmmmm
He wants to ask you out, right, lover boy?
((Redder than thoose cherries in drinks)) Uhhhhhhhh,.,.,.,.,,. yeah
Ummmmmmmmmmmmm, yea Fang that'll be cool
Sooo, no girls night out,
Nope, sorry, Rose
I'll go order, I know you guys dont like resturants
((Max and Fang in Edwards room eating, Iggy installed cameras and speakers))
Sooooooooooo, uhhhhhhhhhhhh, good food
Yeah
Ugggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Shut up! Do you WANT them to find us!?!?!?!!?!?!?
Hey, uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, Max?
Yeah, Fang?
I've gotta tell ya something
What?
((Eavesdroppers get eager))
Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Out with already!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IGGY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Woops, my bad
YOU'RE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO DEAD BIRDDORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Heres my color code:
Max: This purpley color
Fang: Gray
Alice: Light Pink
Iggy* Bright teal
Edward: Red
Rosalie: Yellow
This is Gomenasai by t.A.T.u. NOT OWNED BY ME!!!!!!!!!!!! ITS WAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYY TO AWSOME!!!!!!!!! This is the song i thought would be best for Max, my explinations are in this color, k?
What I thought wasn't mine- they cant own anything, it could be a trick
In the light
Was one of a kind
A precious pearl- what they do have is special
When I wanted to cry
I couldn't cause I
Wasn't allowed- she has to be strong for the Flock
Gomenasai for everything
Gomenasai, I know I let you down
Gomenasai till the end I never needed a friend- she cant trust anyone
Like I do now
What I thought wasn't all
lSo innocen
tWas a delicate doll
Of porcelain- what they do have is delicate and they have to stick together
When I wanted to call you
And ask you for help
I stopped myself- she cant trust anyone (but the flock) to help her
Gomenasai for everything
Gomenasai, I know I let you down
Gomenasai till the end
I never needed a friend
Like I do now- she cant trust anyone, but she needs some body (Fang)
What I thought was a dream
A mirage
Was as real as it seemed- theyre not sure whats a whitecoat/erasers trick
A privilege
When I wanted to tell youI made a mistake- she doesn’t confide in anybody, or tell them shes hurt
I walked away
Gomenasai, for everything
Gomenasai, Gomenasai,I never needed a friend,
Like I do now
Gomenasai, I let you down
Gomenasai, Gomenasai, Gomenasai,Gomenasai till the end
I never needed a friend
Like I do now
P.S. GOMENASAI MEANS IM SORRY IN JAPANESE!
Hello people of the world with internet access! I'm New Yorks one and only Silver Rose (hopefully)! Well like some blogs this website is totally dedicated to fan-fic and just plain funny things. I'll mostly write Maximum Ride (by:James Patterson), Twilight Saga (by:Stephenie Meyer), and Inkheart Saga (By:Cornelia Funke) stories. If you haven't read these (totally awsome!!!!) books, go to another website or drive 90 miles an hour to your nearest Borders with a credit card and go get them!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm preety crazy (and most of the time hyper), hence I'm preety funny. So check back every once and a while and check out the blog
Luv**
New Yorks Silver Rose <3
