My First Convo

Heres my first fan fic ever! I'm a blunt person, so tell what I'm doing wrong if u dont like it.................. Here we go..............

Hey Rosalie, Alice!
Hey Max, what up?
Hey, ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, can i ask u guys something?
Sure
I wanna go out tonight, get dressed up, so somewhere. A person can only take soooooooooo much Iggy and Fang
YAY!!!!!!!!!, ask Bella I'll do a great job
Bella: (mouthing and waving arms) NOOOOO SAVE YOURSELF!!1
(after hours)
(Walk downstairs in sequined black dress, hair nice and steletto heels)
Oh.My.God
What, what is it Fang?!?!?!?!
Shut up Iggy its nothing
OOOOOKKKKK whatever
C'mon guys
'K
Wait Max!
Yeah?
Ummmmmmmmmmmm, I, uhhhhhhhhhhh, see, ummmmmmmmmm, If I could take, I mean if you dont want to , ummmmmmmmmm
He wants to ask you out, right, lover boy?
((Redder than thoose cherries in drinks)) Uhhhhhhhh,.,.,.,.,,. yeah
Ummmmmmmmmmmmm, yea Fang that'll be cool
Sooo, no girls night out,
Nope, sorry, Rose
I'll go order, I know you guys dont like resturants
((Max and Fang in Edwards room eating, Iggy installed cameras and speakers))
Sooooooooooo, uhhhhhhhhhhhh, good food
Yeah
Ugggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Shut up! Do you WANT them to find us!?!?!?!!?!?!?
Hey, uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, Max?
Yeah, Fang?
I've gotta tell ya something
What?
((Eavesdroppers get eager))
Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Out with already!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IGGY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Woops, my bad
YOU'RE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO DEAD BIRDDORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!